Week 7: Greeting Card Illustration Progress

This is my wifi greeting card inside (bigger pic):

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envelope:

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monorail greeting card:

inside: I already fix it so the circle won’t look oval and the lines also won’t looks wider horizontally vs vertically.

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evelope: I made the sentence bigger so it’ll be easier to see and also people can write “from: ” and “to: ” above the sentence.

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One thought on “Week 7: Greeting Card Illustration Progress

  1. I think your text (at the bottom of the inside part) are generally too long and wordy. Can you ask a friend who’s good in english to summarize the text and check for grammar/spelling?

    envelopes, please make sure your designs are behind and not in front.

    monorail map – still looks oval and stretched to me

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